Tender responses often contain statements such as “We provide a high-quality service,” “Our team is highly experienced,” or “We have robust processes.”
These may all be true. But the evaluator needs evidence.
Depending on the question, useful evidence might include:
More evidence isn’t automatically better. Ask: Does this evidence prove the particular claim I’m making?
Instead of “We improved service performance,” consider whether you can legitimately state: “Performance against [relevant KPI] improved from X to Y over [period].”
Specific, verifiable information gives the evaluator more to assess.
Don’t simply insert a statistic. Connect it to the contract and explain what it demonstrates about your capability.
Ask:
An experienced reviewer can challenge unsupported statements and identify places where additional evidence may strengthen your response.
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